WRITING FLUENCY TEST
Hi! guys here you have to correct the writing fluency test. Do not forget to respect the indeed, capital letters and punctuation marks. Read a writing and comment about your companion's writing. How can she / he improve? Have a nice afternoon!
Hi teacher.! I am Fatima the 2A N.L.19 here is my exam: in this exam talking about ta personal narrative. was situation before how I was very small how my father, my mom,and me grandmothers and my father went Ixtapan de la Sal.
ResponderEliminarWe stayed in hotel and after we went to a spa named "El rollo".
And we went of many mechanic one of it games was one wheels were funny.
But I went was to where my mom slip and missing the knowledge. I can answers the exam say and my mom thst no go up and so cant enjoy of the vacations
Hi!! I´am Marifer I think that you can improve if you read english magazines and you also can listen english music.But what you have to focus more is on the order of the words and they mean.
Eliminarhello I´m Lizette and i think that you need to practice how to think in english and how to whrite it, also to White more in your whriting exams ;)
EliminarHELLO I AM RODRIGO ROMERO I SAID THAT FATHIMA HAVES TO IMPROVES HER WORDS THEY HAVE A CORRECT ENGLISH BUT THEY CAN IMPROVES :)
ResponderEliminarThank you Rodrigo by the
Eliminarcomment I'll take very in account :D
HELLO TEACHER I AM RODRIGO ROMERO VAZQUEZ OF 2A NL-26 HERE IS MY EXAM: WHEN I WAS 6 YEARS OLD I STARTED THE PRIMARY, I HAVE A PROBLEM I DIDN´T HAVE A FRIEND TO PLAY, I HAD TOLD TO MY BROTHER AND HE TOLD ME THAT I WOULD HAVE MANY FRIENDS IN PIAVE SCHOOL WHEN MY BROTHER TOLD ME THAT I WAS VERY HAPPY AND I WENT TO THE CLASSROOM.
ResponderEliminarIN THE CLASSROOM I SAW A GOOD PERSON THAT TALKED ME ONE DAY, I WENT TO TALK WITH HIM AND I ASKED HIS NAME AND HE TOLD ME THAT HIS NAME WAS FERNANDO BONILLA.I STARTED TO TALK MORE IN ALL THE CLASSES AND IN THE WE STARTED TO TALK ABOUT MUSIC LIKES HE SAID THAT HE LIKES THE XBOX VIDEOGAMES LIKE HALO GEARS OF WAR AND I SAID ME TOO LIKES THE SPORTS AND THE THE VIDEOGAMES HE SAID ME THAT THE MOST FAVORITES SPORT IS THE BASQUETBALL AND I WAS HAPPY TO HAVE MY FIRST FRIEND THAT LIKES THE THINGS THAT I LIKED, TODAY IS 2013 I HAVE 14 YEARS OLD AND FERNANDO AND I HAVE A VERY GOOD FRIEND SHIP IN THE SAD AND ANGRY MOMENTS IM HAPPY TO HAVE A GOOD FRIEND.
I am Fatima I said that Rodrigo have one good history and that worded is very good :D
EliminarHi Teacher I´am María Fernanda González Mtz of 2°A NL.16 here is my exam:
ResponderEliminarAll started one day of October in the school with my best friend Natalia.
She had a problem with the physics teacher because she didn´t do the homework.
As a result she asked me if I gave her my notebook of physics,and because of that
my problem started.
I told her that if I gave her my notebook she must took care of it.After hours
we were in spanish class ,when I saw the hands of the spanish teacher she already had my notebook ,I was very worried .
I never thought that about the spanish teacher.
Natalia was worried too.We tried to spoke with the spanish teacher ,she told us
that she could give us the notebook the next day ,in that moment I was relaxed,and Natalia
told me that the problem won´t pass again...
I´m Rodrigo Fuentes and I think that´s a good story but I think you could write about your reaction with her ;)
EliminarHi teacer I´m Rodrigo Fuentes from 2°A and the correction is:
ResponderEliminarWhen I was 9 years old I went to Acapulcowith my goodparents and with my cousin, we went there for summer vacations. I was so excited because it has passed a long time since the last time I had been there.
When we arrived there, everything was so different. We wnt to the hotel and after that, we went directly to the pool, but when I saw it, the scare got on me because I didn´t know how to swim and the pool was deep, very deep.
I told my goodparents about my fear, but they just laughed and told me that it was okay to have fear but they never would let anything bad happened to me, so I got into the pool and began to "swim", at the end I did it not to bad and enjoyed my vacations
Hello teacher! Im Lizette Nasheli from 2°A and this is my correction:
ResponderEliminarEverything pased in Ecatepec when a woman got down of her car and arrived a bus. Two minutes later another woman got down of the bus and the other began shouting a lot of bad words. These two women began fighting in the avenue , that´s why there was a lot of traffic.Then a man got out of the womans car and tried to calm to his wife. All people began arriving there to see what was happening and to see whay the trafic was stopped , the man shouted -stop fighting! and since that momento the women started to fight with him.
Minutes later the man´s wife shouted to all the people tha her husvand was the liest person un the world and that the woman was his lovely friend.
minutes later everything was in calm , all the people began to go but one person call to the police to go to clm everything and to control the traffic, the police took the tree persons to the police apartment and since that we dont know what happen next.
Hello! I'm Paola Abigail Bravo López from 2a N.L.5
ResponderEliminarMy family and I where in the supermarcket and we were finishing to buy the things we needed so we went to pay, but the places to pay where with a lot of people, so we started to look one place with not too many people. And we founded a place to pay our things.
When we found a place, we saw that they were a supermarcket car alone, so my father move the car and he put it on another place, so a woman went with us and told us that was her car, but we told her that we almost have to pay and that her car was alone so we think that someone put it there.
The woman was so angry, so she started to told us that she was first and more things. So my mom said to the woman "hey relax" it's ok put your car in the place where it was, we don't have any problem, we can wait more time to pay.
Hello I'm Brenda Barrón C. 2A 2
ResponderEliminarI will talk about an event that happened when my brother borned. My mom and my father were ther when te doctor told them had it was a boy. And after that my mom told me taht I had a brother. But something was wrong becauses becuase my mom began to have problems, she got low pressure and she felt bad and my father took to the hospital. But teh doctor told that she was good. After my brother borned with out problems and the doctor said to my momthat she have to care of my brother ann herself. The solution was not too complicate the birth of my brother was taht my father take it to the hispital.
It's good but please take care of you writing 'cuse there are many mistakes
EliminarAlmost 4 or 5 years ago, my friend Eric,
ResponderEliminarwho lives on my block thought me how to
Get down of the bicycle with only one leg. It was
a cool style that only he and me knew, but
I never imagined what could happen.
One day he invites me to go out and have some
fun with the bicycles. We planned to do
some races, and we did it, but then I felt down so horrible 'cues I was ridding so fast on that moment
All the kids who were there including Eric, got
scared because my knee and my elbow were bleeding a lot. Thanks God my father is a doctor, so he helped me and put some medicine and bandage on my injuries. I'm still having the scar
on my knee made by that accident and since that
day I haven't done that again.